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Poem

Postby DOLLY » Mon Mar 24, 2008 6:37 pm

I wrote this in a few moments break I had...just a ramble...ramble..ramble on...a thought I worried I might lose if I waited
to put it down...I hope I do not bore you...Dolly :D

RIGHT BEFORE YOU...

I saw a current photo taken of you in a rushed moment of your busy life..

I think of the life we shared for so long...I was right before you..

and I was all that mattered...all my thoughts and dreams were built around you..

finally I had found someone I wanted to open the locked door of my heart to..

but when you give someone your all..leaving nothing for yourself...love

gets burned out..fades under the pressure of lack of oxygen..of burning to having

your own sense of self...I was right before you..in front of you and

yet you could not see me...how much your fading slowly away was

killing me....I was right in front of you when you let it all slip away..

and I admit I am not over you....

You were right in front of me..and I took you for granted..that all your

love would forever be mine..spoiled I held your heart..and dropped it

in pursuit of my own desires...I could not see the nights you spent alone

that you were building walls that would keep me away from you...

You were right in front of me but I could not see the value of you...

I was unaware I was losing your love as I continued to push ahead with

my own thoughts of how I thought our life should be...

the love over...you were right in front of me when you said good-bye

none of my tears could weaken your resolve...I had gone too far...

You were right in front of me when you turned your back to leave...

I lost you and a huge part of myself....and now as time has gone

bye ..I see your photograph....and find I no longer know you...

as I used to be able to read your face...but not anymore.....

no one to blame, no one at fault....but deep inside I know

it is me...for not seeing you when you were right in front of me...
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Re: Poem

Postby mrsm » Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:42 pm

omg!! Dolly, i love this! makes me want to say, hey 1 i'm still here :) do you mind if i copy ? i don't want to lose it either.
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Re: Poem

Postby mrsm » Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:58 pm

I really had to meditate as to whether or not to share a poem i wrote some years ago. maybe now is a good time. just wish i could break out of this writers block :(

LIFE-THE ROAD

We have walked the trail of tears
Our journey has been long
We walk each day the road of life, yet still
We must be strong

Love and Peace guide each step
The Great Spirit in our hearts
Though we face many obstacles
Each morning is a new start

The sunlight glows......
Then moonbeams deep at rest......
Seasons change.....

After the winter
Upon it's breast, Spring
Gives us hope of blessedness

Like the birds we too shall sing
Great Spirit you are with us giving
Love and Peace
Joy and Strength

Everlasting.....

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Re: Poem

Postby DOLLY » Mon Mar 24, 2008 11:21 pm

mrsm wrote:omg!! Dolly, i love this! makes me want to say, hey 1 i'm still here :) do you mind if i copy ? i don't want to lose it either.



thank you for your words of support....I loved your poem as well..

cheers,
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