Growing Into A Man

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Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:12 pm

Growing into a man
sand and grow
I am
tend and sow
my land
close and near
exam
into a band
a bend
road end
road begin
sending sin
from a rend
in here
a tare
I tore
and telling
the score
the scare
is the oar
of my presence
galore.
I'm in love with you.
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:46 pm

Rebirth
in the afore night
death came to grasp me
I gasp
summerary laps
judgment acts.
I'm in love with you.
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby Mark Rink » Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:04 pm

:-O what the fuc* is this
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby bravefan » Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:44 pm

Fleas....Adam had em.

Thank you very much!
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:31 pm

I flea
sigh
and see
what I see
what I be
struggling
to be free
apparently.
I'm in love with you.
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:36 pm

Honesty
falling free
honestly
calling thee
as a fan
as a friend
can't you see.
I'm in love with you.
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:43 pm

Love
love
love
and I think I see
a waterfall
call to me
to lie
to lay
to fly
to say
love is still the answer
every day
and I think I'll say
love
love
love
is here to stay
here to play
in a round about way.
I'm in love with you.
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:52 pm

Freeflow
falling down
fleas go round and round
steep low
to the ground
northern songs
wind in sound
rock and bound
block in pound
clock in town
goes chim chime
grim climb
in sublime.
I'm in love with you.
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:00 pm

Starting again
as Yesterday plays
stolid pen
sun in haze
gun in blaze
line in zen
in silverlined rays
the days of a wren.
I'm in love with you.
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Re: Growing Into A Man

Postby hawaii-jason luis rivera » Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:26 pm

To call her
my love
obscures my reasons for solitude
an island I have made and unmade
this game
this gamble
hearts are torn and mumble
help
will I
when I
I will.
I'm in love with you.
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